tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11797943.post8009902383395305188..comments2023-10-18T15:57:08.496+08:00Comments on Running Waters: The PrisonerJonzzhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00294273031668725990noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11797943.post-57317643770192112512007-06-07T13:41:00.000+08:002007-06-07T13:41:00.000+08:00Good poem :) I used to be able to write poems, sig...Good poem :) I used to be able to write poems, sigh. Now no more, the teenage mood swings dah habis :PApplegalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11484793582434870405noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11797943.post-47921622196078538592007-06-04T00:21:00.000+08:002007-06-04T00:21:00.000+08:00Aiyo. You cant expect too much. I was writing whil...Aiyo. You cant expect too much. I was writing while at work :P<BR/>Btw, not all poems need to rhyme lah.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11797943.post-58629610849640969532007-06-03T22:02:00.000+08:002007-06-03T22:02:00.000+08:00PB: Ha ha, thankslee ping: Ah but that depends on ...<B>PB</B>: Ha ha, thanks<BR/><BR/><B>lee ping</B>: Ah but that depends on the person working with God.<BR/><BR/><B>winniethepooh</B>: Well, we all have to make peace someday. Better to do it continuously then accumulate and having to settle it one shot.<BR/><BR/><B>k.k</B>: Ha ha, thanks, dude!<BR/><BR/><B>eve</B>: Thanks. but I think all of them sound the same. Still trying to come up with a truly original one.<BR/><BR/><B>PB</B>: Ha ha, nice. But needs more work on the rhyming. <BR/><BR/><B>wuching</B>: It's not really about me.Jonzzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00294273031668725990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11797943.post-14972141526066383452007-06-01T19:35:00.000+08:002007-06-01T19:35:00.000+08:00the bird in heaven liao, dun worry too much!the bird in heaven liao, dun worry too much!Wuchinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16181408086690114104noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11797943.post-51880134749366014592007-06-01T14:45:00.000+08:002007-06-01T14:45:00.000+08:00Jonzz, this is for you :)Again, I look at the bird...Jonzz, this is for you :)<BR/><BR/>Again, I look at the bird<BR/>The bird looks at me. <BR/>In these magical words,<BR/>The bird says to me. <BR/><BR/>Surely you remember my friend,<BR/>God made the world<BR/>Of plains, mountains and streams<BR/>And you and me out of his dreams. <BR/><BR/>You to stand on majestic mountains,<BR/>And to conquer the boundless seas <BR/>Each day to grow and learn <BR/>His love and strength we trust. <BR/><BR/>Be courageous my dear friend, <BR/>A bed of roses He did not promise<BR/>But all things made beautiful <BR/>In His perfect time. <BR/><BR/>Again, I look at the bird<BR/>The bird looks at me. <BR/>Then at the twinkle of the eye <BR/>The bird vanishes into Paradise.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11797943.post-7877714346929255862007-06-01T11:51:00.000+08:002007-06-01T11:51:00.000+08:00Wahhhhhhhh..beautiful...Wahhhhhhhh..beautiful...evehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08333958592608750111noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11797943.post-65472866585487692842007-06-01T11:48:00.000+08:002007-06-01T11:48:00.000+08:00wah, bravo! almost shakespeare! liked the way u lo...wah, bravo! almost shakespeare! liked the way u look at caged birdies are better than free man! :)K.K.https://www.blogger.com/profile/03170135158741042477noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11797943.post-84867579540778078682007-06-01T11:35:00.000+08:002007-06-01T11:35:00.000+08:00Jonzz, the last 2 lines of ur poem struck me the m...Jonzz, the last 2 lines of ur poem struck me the most, "I have wronged no one<BR/>And leave peacefully in the end".. I just hope that when i pass on, i can go with a peaceful mind too.winniethepoohhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00819214111724308315noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11797943.post-13738695271965080732007-06-01T11:24:00.000+08:002007-06-01T11:24:00.000+08:00John 8:34 Jesus replied, "What I'm about to tell y...John 8:34 Jesus replied, "What I'm about to tell you is true. Everyone who sins is a slave of sin. <BR/><BR/>Jonzz,<BR/>It is hard to live a sinless life. I struggle with that daily. Angry, impatience, greed, etc. But, when we have God living within us, we can be free from sin. Your caged bird can be free. :)Lee Pinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02475657563792298936noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11797943.post-26052648557558082962007-06-01T10:52:00.000+08:002007-06-01T10:52:00.000+08:00sorry. typo in my comment. typed too fast. i mean ...sorry. typo in my comment. typed too fast. i mean nv failed to BE impressed.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11797943.post-38613463505366587802007-06-01T10:51:00.000+08:002007-06-01T10:51:00.000+08:00Never failed to me impressed by your poems. I mean...Never failed to me impressed by your poems. I mean it :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com